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Monday, January 12, 2009

X-FACTOR #126 – September 1996

The Beast Within
Credits: Howard Mackie (writer), Herb Trime (layout artist), Stephano Raffaele (penciler), Al Milgrom (inker), Comicraft (lettering), Glynis Oliver & Malibu (colors)

Summary: Forge reinstates Mystique and Sabretooth’s restraining devices, and creates shackles for Random and Havok. Polaris and Shard are left to guard Random and Havok, while the rest of the team searches for the Beast. Forge and Sabretooth discover the Beast shackled underneath the abandoned Brand Corporation building, and are quickly attacked by Fatale. Wild Child arrives with Mystique (who has morphed wings to fly with), and knocks Fatale unconscious. When the Beast is freed, both Sabretooth and Wild Child are suspicious. Sabretooth breaks through a brick wall and discovers the real Beast, who is still shackled. The Beast is released and defeats his imposter, the Dark Beast. Meanwhile, Random and Havok use their enhanced powers to break out of their restraints. Random attacks Havok when he thinks that he’s luring Polaris into a trap. Havok blasts him, reverting his body into a gelatinous liquid. Havok then attacks Polaris, leaving her near-death. When the rest of X-Factor emerges with Dark Beast and Fatale as prisoners, Dark Beast boasts that he will save Polaris and force the team into his debt.

Continuity Notes: The Beast was previously seen in X-Men #54 where he managed to escape his shackles, only to be greeted by three mysterious figures. That’s contradicted by this issue, which tells a conflicting story of his escape. I assume that the three figures were always supposed to be Forge, Sabretooth, and Mystique (as they were the ones left to discover him at the end of the last issue), but absolutely none of the details match up.

Mystique continues to develop new powers, as she grows wings (based on the Angel’s original pair). Outside of Forge saying that he didn’t know she could do that, the story doesn’t treat it as a big deal at all.

Sabretooth had a past run-in with Fatale in Bangkok, and she now wants to kill him. This has no bearing on the story whatsoever, it’s just another vague line given to a mystery character to make them feel “connected” to the established characters.

Random tells Polaris that the Dark Beast has been helping him to control his powers for as long as he can remember. He also says that he helped him create the “Random” identity and that he’s the closest thing to a father he’s ever known. The move towards making Havok an actual villain begins, as Random claims that the Dark Beast “never makes you do anything you really don’t want to do”, and that he only “keyed into something that was already there” in Havok. Havok later tells Polaris that he can’t shake off Dark Beast’s influence because, “first you have to want to”.

Creative Differences: If you want to learn the circumstances that lead to Herb Trimpe working on this title, check out his memoirs that were published by the New York Times: “Old Superheroes Never Die, They Join the Real World”.

Review: Ugh, another awful issue. The preceding issues of this series had their fair share of arbitrary elements thrown in with the bland stories, but we’re now reaching the point where the run moves from “lame stories that the next writer can just ignore” to “lame stories that the next writer will have to retcon”. And, since Howard Mackie never seemed to leave any assignment he was given during this era, there never was another writer on this volume of X-Factor. Consequently, the “Havok secretly wanted to be a villain” nonsense remains an odd blemish in the character’s history (I believe Mackie contradicted himself later on in his run, when he tried to dismiss Havok’s actions as a part of a ruse, but that’s too little, too late). The demolition of Random’s character is also completed with this issue, as we learn that his entire persona was invented by another character that hadn’t even been created when he first appeared. Marvel had no idea what to do with Random after Peter David left (and they didn’t seem to grasp that he was actually a parody of the ‘90s bad boy heroes), but a quickie shock value death still would’ve been better than this.

Aside from the nonsensical story, the art also seems like a misguided attempt at imitating an early Image comic. Even with a veteran artist like Trimpe providing layouts, Raffaele’s storytelling remains either dull or confusing for much of the issue (one scene that has the Dark Beast doing acrobatics around his base is so horribly interpreted, he resembles a limp stick figure in one panel). The style itself is an improvement over last issue’s Jim Lee impression, but the final result is still overwhelmingly mediocre.

It’s hard to deduce what exactly Marvel was thinking during this time. Remaking this book into a grim and gritty, black ops team seems like a forced attempt to follow a trend that was already waning by the mid-90s. Apparently, the new hook for the series is that it’s a “mutant militia” (a phrase that shows up twice in this issue), which doesn’t summon up a very pleasant mental image, given the media hysteria over anti-government militias in rural America during the ‘90s. Was this intentional on Marvel’s part? Were we supposed to be afraid of X-Factor now? If that’s the case, why was a fairly generic superhero writer placed in charge of this series? If you want a dark reimagining of the X-Factor concept with a morally dubious cast, why not hire someone like Warren Ellis or John Ostrander (who wrote a book with a similar premise for DC for years)? Both of those writers were doing work for the X-office during this era, and could’ve done something with the concept.

Monday, December 29, 2008

X-FACTOR #125 – August 1996

The Ticking Clock
Credits: Howard Mackie (writer), Jeff Matsuda (penciler), Al Milgrom (inker), Richard Starkings & Comicraft (lettering), Glynis Oliver (colors)

Summary: The Dark Beast unveils a brainwashed Havok to Onslaught, hoping to impress him with a powerful follower. Meanwhile, X-Factor is attacked by their training Sentinel, which has suddenly gone back online. Forge sends Mystique to retrieve Sabretooth, and the duo are soon greeted by the teleporting Fatale. Fatale teleports the Sentinel away, forcing X-Factor to leave the missing Sabretooth and Mystique behind as they track the Sentinel. The team soon arrives at the former headquarters of the Brand Corporation. They’re attacked by Havok, who follows orders and tries to kill X-Factor. During the fight, Fatale exposes Random to the team as the Dark Beast’s plant. Random remains loyal to Polaris and tries to save her from Havok. He takes a direct blast from Havok, forcing his body to revert to its true teenage form. Nearby, Forge discovers an army of Sentinels underground and is attacked by Post. Post soon declares that the fight is boring him, and orders the Sentinels to attack New York City.

Continuity Note: This is the first appearance of the brainwashed Havok. As the months progress, Marvel will try to sell him as an actual villain and not just a programmed one, but it doesn’t catch on.

Review: The Onslaught crossover reaches X-Factor, and doesn’t manage to impact the title’s quality either way. Since most of the storylines seem to have been going around in circles for a year at this point, dragging the book into the latest crossover isn’t much of a distraction. The Dark Beast had been a behind-the-scenes villain in the title for a few months, so using him as the connection to Onslaught makes sense. There are a few ongoing threads that are resolved here, as Havok returns and Random is exposed as the Dark Beast’s pawn, but the delivery is so bland it’s hard to care. As usual, the dialogue is dull and the characters don’t exhibit much personality. Making the team’s former leader a brainwashed villain and actually sticking with the idea had potential, but I don’t recall it ever working out. This issue’s introduction of brainwashed Havok is just as flat and boring as the rest of the story. Polaris gets dialogue like, “I don’t want to live in a world in which there is no hope that I can have you back”, and Havok gets gems like, “Then…I shall kill you!” The actual pacing of the story is fine, as it moves quickly without feeling too rushed, but the scripting makes it a chore to read. Matsuda’s art, as usual, is all over the place. His redesign of Havok isn’t perfect (what are those things on his shoulders supposed to be?), but it’s a tolerable combination of his previous looks and it suits Matsuda’s style. The rest of the artwork looks rushed, as figures twist and deform without reason, making it even harder to care about what’s going on.

Free Fall
Credits: Howard Mackie (writer), Stefano Raffaele (penciler), Al Milgrom (inker), Richard Starkings & Comicraft (lettering), Glynis Oliver & Kevin Somers and Malibu (colors)

Summary: Fatale teleports Mystique and Sabretooth into the sewers, where they meet the Dark Beast. He neutralizes their inhibitor collars and offers them an opportunity to work for Onslaught. Forge arrives through a teleportation portal, and Dark Beast asks them to kill him. Instead, the pair turns against Dark Beast and attacks him. Mystique morphs a suit of spiky armor to defend herself, but is quickly knocked unconscious by the Dark Beast. Sabretooth fights him to the ground, but Dark Beast teleports away before he can be harmed. Forge, Mystique, and Sabretooth look at the Dark Beast’s monitors and learn the X-Man Beast is being held captive.

Continuity Note: Mystique’s shapeshifting powers begin to change with this issue. Previously, she was only able to change her physical appearance, and not adopt new powers or go beyond a humanoid form. Now, she can create claws, change her eyes to adopt feline vision, and turn her bones into a spiky armor. There’s no explanation for the change outside of “I’m full of surprises”.

Approved By The Comics Code Authority: To disguise the fact that Raffaele has drawn Mystique wearing a thong, her entire buttocks are colored white to match her costume.

Review: This is really a continuation of the main story, but I guess Matsuda’s inability to draw the entire issue forced it into becoming a backup. That is a preferable alternative to having the two artists interrupt one another, even though Raffaele’s art is even worse than Matsuda’s. Matsuda’s art during this period at least has a cartoonish charm that occasionally works. Raffaele’s work just looks like an awkward Jim Lee knockoff. The story’s main purpose is to have some other characters discover that the Beast is being held captive, which seems like something that should’ve happened in one of the X-Men’s titles since it really has nothing to do with X-Factor. Mystique and Sabretooth also lose their inhibitor restraints, which is presumably a big deal, but I don’t recall if this went anywhere. Suddenly giving Mystique new powers with no explanation is just annoying, and I think they were just dropped after X-Factor’s cancellation anyway. Just like the main story, it’s pretty dreary.

Thursday, October 2, 2008

X-FACTOR #117 – December 1995

Adversaries…Old and New

Credits: Howard Mackie (writer), Steve Epting & Stefano Raffaele (pencilers), Al Milgrom (inker), Glynis Oliver & Malibu Hues (colors), Richard Starkings & Comicraft (lettering)


Summary

Haven screams out in agony as her unborn child demands to be released. Roma appears in front of her, telling her that it’s too late and that the Adversary will be reborn. Meanwhile, X-Factor is being attacked by a Sentinel. Unbeknownst to the team, Forge and Val Cooper borrowed the Sentinel from the government to use as a training exercise. The Sentinel swats Wild Child through a window into X-Factor’s headquarters, which leads Havok to overreact and destroy it. Wild Child wakes up inside Forge’s lab and briefly meets Shard. When Wild Child later asks Forge about her, he’s surprised to learn that her hologram program spontaneously appeared. Havok is given a letter that is supposedly from Scarlet. He follows the letter’s instructions and drives to a nearby coal processing plant. He’s confronted there by Random. Meanwhile, Naze comes across Roma while driving out of the desert. They leave to find Forge, hoping that he can’t deny Naze face-to-face.


Continuity Notes

Naze is Forge’s mentor, who was killed off back in the ‘80s not long after his first appearance (He was secretly killed and replaced by a Dire Wraith, which was revealed in the “Fall of the Mutants” storyline). His role in virtually all of his appearances is to warn Forge about the Adversary. How he survived isn’t explained.


The implication that Adversary has always been Haven’s baby is a retcon that first appears here. Roma tells Haven “you have brought this upon yourself” by trying to bring about the catastrophes of the Mahapralaya (a reference to this issue). The implication is that Adversary had been lying to her about the Mahapralaya for all of this time. Later, Naze asks Roma about Haven, implying some past connection between the trio.


“Huh?” Moment

A misplaced word balloon has Mystique referring to Shard as “cute”, when it’s supposed to be Wild Child’s line (everyone knows Mystique only has eyes for octogenarians).


Review

And now, X-Factor’s lame sequel to “Fall of the Mutants” begins. I can see why Mackie wants to bring Haven into this, since she was presented as a major villain in the title for a while and it creates the impression that all of this stuff was planned out in advance. Of course, knowing that this title has gone through three writers since Haven was introduced kills that illusion, and retconning the Adversary into DeMatteis’ original Haven story undermines what he was trying to accomplish with the storyline. The rest of the issue is dedicated to a pointless fight scene with a Sentinel, and even more scenes of Random stalking Havok. Random was first sent after Havok in issue #115, and only now do they meet face to face (and the actual fight scene is left for the next issue). All of it’s just exceedingly dull, as the plot continues to move incrementally towards some big battle that only receives a tiny amount of foreshadowing in each issue. If the characters had more personality, I wouldn’t mind the aimless plotting so much, but Mackie isn’t able to make any of the characters even slightly interesting.

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